Wednesday 29 April 2020
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Hi Max, you have put alot of thought into this piece of writing and you have done a amzaing jog great work
ReplyDeleteHey Max, this is such a fantastic diary entry! I really love the detail and emotion you have put into your writing. I feel as though I am in the character you have written about experiencing all these war moments.
ReplyDeleteWhat was the hardest part about writing this diary entry?
Trying to write it as if I was a soldier because I don´t know what it was really like. I think i did a good job.
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