
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 18 June 2020
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Max,
ReplyDeleteI like how this is really easy to read because its close up and you can see the labels (unlike my one),
Next time maybe you could add a question for us to respond to.
Thank you for your feedback
DeleteHi Max
ReplyDeleteI like your picture that you have made.
Next time maybe can you draw this better.
Next time can u draw this for me?