Wednesday 17 June 2020

Reading task 2


W.A.L.T write what happened in the past.


So i had to write a heroic story about someone so I did it about me saving my dad by getting the lifeguards to get him out of the rip.


Hope you enjoy! :) 

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6 comments:

  1. Anonymous17 June 2020 at 13:39

    Hello Max,
    This is Tallulah
    I really like this blog post it is nice and colour full and i like how it is easy to read.This is a great story to read
    maybe next time you could add a question for people who are reading your blog post.
    Great work max

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    1. Anonymous17 June 2020 at 13:45

      Thanks Tallulah for the comment in my next blog post I will try to add a question.

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  2. Anonymous17 June 2020 at 13:42

    Hi Max,
    This is an amazing blog post,
    I love how you helped your dad and the colour of the text box.
    I love how you have added a picture as well,
    Next time you could put a little more information.
    Good blog post Max!

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    1. Anonymous17 June 2020 at 13:46

      Thanks Charlotte for your comment and thanks for the feedback

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  3. Anonymous17 June 2020 at 13:43

    Hi Max,WOW was it scary, glad you & your dad are OK,keep posting Amazing blog posts. :)

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    1. Anonymous17 June 2020 at 13:44

      Thanks hunter I was really scared

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