Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 18 June 2020
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi max,good job, I will remember this if i ever need to use it,next time you could make the slide & text bigger.
ReplyDeleteHi Max its Jacko I really like your blog post I will remember this just in case if I need
ReplyDeleteHi Max,I liked the topic you picked. I like this because it talks about if a robber comes then you know what to do. You taught me what to do if a robber comesto steal some thing. Next time you could maybe add in another slide or so. Why did you pick the topic of what to do if a robber comes?
ReplyDeletenice work max i like the tips maybe next time make the slide bigger
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