My story is about a guy getting killed on the highest sky scraper in the world at midnight. There was a thief and a detective involved. The detective was trying to get the bad guy because he stole
$10,000,000 and he was going to spend it on guns so he could kill people. but then it was a 1,000000000 foot drop so he had nowhere to go the detective said ¨this is the end of the line mate¨ the bad guy took his last deep breath then... he died. Hope you enjoy my movie.
That was a really interesting story with lots of things I didn't expect. I think you should slow down your stop motion so we could see it better.
ReplyDeleteHi max im George from marshland school, the video was really well done next time maybe slow it down or make it a bit longer But Good job.
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ReplyDeleteNice job but next time dont that person killing him
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Romeo and I go to St Francis of Asissi
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you put some drama in it to.
Did you know I like stop motion too because it allows me to create animations like the ones you see in Captain Underpants.
Next time, you could make it a bit slower because it is really fast.
Why did you you put the guy dying?
My name is Rafa and this is amazing because you made it look like an action stop motion.,
ReplyDeleteDid you know I liked how you put what happened on top of the stop motion.
Next time, you could make even more epic and longer animation because it was short.
Why did you have some shooting there?