Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 30 December 2020
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia Ora Max,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.
I like activities like this as it teaches you about cyber safety while also encouraging you to practice writing and sharing your positive, helpful and thoughtful quality comments.
I thought your comment was definitely a quality one, you thanked her for the comment well. Next time you could ask a question in return to encourage them to reply and start a comment thread.
Did you get an opportunity to play the cyber game in the activity, if so how did you enjoy it?
I also see in your post below that you have been posting and sharing some positive, helpful and thoughtful comments so don't forget all comments that are positive, thoughtful or helpful will receive points. Remember to submit a link to your published comment using this form.
Happy Holidays, Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates