Today we had to put private and public infomation we had to hilight private infomation in red and public infomation in green and if you dont understand and if your not sure you hilight it in orange.
Jai and I were partners and we had to write a story about a fake charcter and change things up including public and private infomation in the story.
Can you identify public and private infomation in my post if you do comment down below thanks!!!
Hi Max what a fun story! I could spot where you were deliberately adding private information along with public and I could recognise what you were trying to do. Next time, read over your story and fix up spacing and spelling errors before you publish it. Remember, if it doesn't sound right in your head then it probably needs changed a little! Well done. Nice work both of you.
ReplyDeleteHave a go at fixing up your errors and then update so I can see what you have improved.
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