Today for reading we had write about what Haora saw, heard, smelled, touched and tasted.
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Max,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing this to your blog. I really like how your sentences are simple enough to put an image into our heads.
I wonder, next time I would like to see you write this as a paragraph so it connects and flows.